I think of my peace paintings as one long poem, with each
I think of my peace paintings as one long poem, with each painting being a single stanza.
Host: The warehouse smelled of paint, iron, and a faint trace of dust that glittered in the late afternoon light. Sunlight streamed through the tall, cracked windows, cutting across half-finished canvases that leaned against the walls like waiting souls. The air was heavy with color — blues bleeding into reds, golds into gray. It was quiet except for the slow hum of a radiator and the sound of brushes being cleaned in a tin jar of murky water.
Jack stood near a large canvas — abstract, layered, restless — his hands stained with streaks of cobalt and crimson. Jeeny sat cross-legged on a stool, her notebook open, a pencil tucked behind her ear.
They hadn’t spoken for a while. The silence felt alive, like a third presence breathing between them.
Jeeny: “You’ve been at that one for hours.”
Jack: “Yeah. It’s not finished.”
Jeeny: “It never is with you.”
Jack: (smirks) “Perfection’s a myth. I just keep chasing what it feels like to be done.”
Host: He stepped back, eyes narrowing at the canvas — a storm of colors and shapes, all colliding, refusing to settle. The sunlight slid across the paint, making parts of it shimmer, others sink into shadow.
Jeeny: “You know, I read something by Robert Indiana today. He said, ‘I think of my peace paintings as one long poem, with each painting being a single stanza.’”
Jack: “A poem? That’s cute. Painters pretending to be poets now?”
Jeeny: “Not pretending — expressing. He meant that every piece is connected. Each one adds to a larger story. Like chapters in a life, or lines in a confession.”
Jack: “Maybe for him. For me, each painting’s its own fight. No harmony, no grand design. Just survival in color.”
Host: The light dimmed as a cloud passed over the sun, the whole room shifting to a softer gray. Jeeny watched him — his sharp profile, the flicker of frustration in his eyes, the loneliness wrapped inside his confidence.
Jeeny: “That’s still poetry, Jack. Even if you don’t call it that. Every fight leaves a mark, and when you line them all up — that’s your poem. You’re just writing it in paint instead of words.”
Jack: “Then what’s it say? That I’m angry? That I can’t fix what’s broken?”
Jeeny: “Maybe it says you’re trying. And maybe that’s enough.”
Host: Jack looked down, wiping his hands on a rag already soaked with color. He didn’t reply. The radiator hissed softly, filling the pause like a breath held too long.
Jack: “You sound like you think art means something. Like it saves people.”
Jeeny: “I think it does. Not always loudly, not for everyone — but quietly, for the ones who need it most. Look at Indiana. He painted ‘LOVE’ — just four letters — and the world recognized itself in it. That wasn’t decoration, Jack. That was salvation in color.”
Jack: “Yeah, but that was him. He had belief. I’ve got… noise.”
Jeeny: “No, you’ve got truth. And truth’s messy. Art isn’t meant to fix peace, it’s meant to seek it. That’s why he called them peace paintings — not because they are peaceful, but because they reach for it.”
Host: The sun broke through again, cutting across Jack’s face. He looked up, eyes flickering as if the light had caught him off guard.
Jack: “So, you think my chaos counts as peace?”
Jeeny: “I think peace isn’t absence of chaos. It’s the rhythm you find inside it — like a heartbeat under a war drum.”
Jack: (half-smiling) “You and your metaphors.”
Jeeny: “You started it. You’re the one painting stanzas without knowing it.”
Host: She rose, walked over to one of his earlier canvases — a swirl of dark reds and silver. Her fingers hovered just above the surface, not touching, but tracing the air around it as if feeling its pulse.
Jeeny: “This one — this feels like grief.”
Jack: “It was. My mother had just passed. I didn’t know what else to do.”
Jeeny: “And this?” (she gestured to a blue and gold one)
Jack: “Hope, maybe. Or the memory of it.”
Jeeny: “Exactly. Each one’s a stanza. Different emotions, same poem. You’re writing your life in layers.”
Host: Her voice softened, the room breathing with her words. Jack stood still, eyes traveling across the collection of canvases — each one a different scar, a different moment frozen in pigment.
Jack: “You really think art’s that personal? That it says who we are?”
Jeeny: “Of course. Art is autobiography disguised as abstraction.”
Jack: “Then I guess my autobiography’s a mess.”
Jeeny: “Mess is human. That’s why people understand it. Nobody really connects to perfection, Jack — they connect to the cracks.”
Host: The light shifted again, the sky outside blushing with sunset. The walls glowed gold, turning every painting into something alive — breathing, almost trembling.
Jack: “You ever feel like you’re trying to say something too big for words?”
Jeeny: “Every day. That’s why I write. And that’s why you paint.”
Jack: “But what if nobody ever hears it?”
Jeeny: “Then say it anyway. The act itself is the peace.”
Host: The air thickened with the quiet weight of understanding. Jack looked at the latest canvas again — chaotic swirls, lines breaking into light. His hand hovered over it, almost tenderly.
Jeeny: “You know what I think?”
Jack: “What?”
Jeeny: “That all your paintings are one long apology — to yourself, to the people you’ve lost, to the silence you can’t forgive.”
Jack: (after a pause) “Maybe. Or maybe they’re just echoes. Fragments that don’t know how to end.”
Jeeny: “Then keep painting. Let them become sentences, paragraphs — until they stop echoing.”
Host: She moved closer, standing beside him now. The two of them faced the wall of canvases — a mosaic of turmoil and beauty. Together, they looked like readers before a sacred text.
Jeeny: “You know, Indiana wasn’t just painting peace. He was searching for meaning in repetition. Each piece was an attempt to rewrite the same feeling — until it finally spoke.”
Jack: “So maybe all artists are translators — trying to turn pain into language.”
Jeeny: “Exactly. And the language doesn’t matter — words, colors, silence — as long as it’s honest.”
Host: The last rays of sunlight hit the highest corner of the wall, catching a fragment of paint that shimmered like a hidden signature. Jack’s face softened.
Jack: “If this is one long poem, Jeeny, I’m not sure how it ends.”
Jeeny: “Maybe it doesn’t. Maybe that’s the point.”
Host: She smiled, that gentle, knowing smile that made time slow for a moment. Jack looked at her — and for once, the tension in his shoulders eased.
Jeeny: “You don’t have to finish the poem, Jack. You just have to live it.”
Jack: “You really believe that?”
Jeeny: “I do. Because peace isn’t something you paint once. It’s something you keep painting — stanza after stanza — until your soul recognizes its own color.”
Host: The sun slipped below the horizon. The room dimmed into a soft twilight, the canvases now silhouettes against the glow. Jack picked up his brush again — not in frustration this time, but quiet purpose.
He dipped it into blue, then gold. His strokes slowed, deliberate.
Jeeny stepped back, watching him work.
Host: In the growing stillness, the faint sound of the brush against canvas became the rhythm of a heartbeat — steady, alive, forgiving.
The camera pulled back, showing the two figures — one painting, one witnessing — surrounded by colors that seemed to breathe.
And on the wall, a single phrase written in soft pencil beneath the newest canvas:
“Each peace is a stanza — together, they form the poem of becoming.”
Host: The light faded completely now, leaving behind only the glow of the paintings — each one a verse, each one unfinished, each one whole in its imperfection.
The warehouse exhaled quietly, like a body finding rest.
And in that silence, Robert Indiana’s words found their reflection — not in sound, but in color:
a poem of peace, still being written.
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