My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be

My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be

22/09/2025
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My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.

My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be heard. I know that people don't usually listen, as it relates to constructive criticism, without getting offended. So, I speak my mind with an attitude that I don't care if you get offended; I just want you to get the message.
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be
My delivery can be intense, but it's intense because I need to be

Host: The city was asleep, but the rooftop was alive with the hum of neon lights and the distant growl of traffic. A faint wind carried the echo of a saxophone from the street below, weaving through the smoke rising from Jack’s cigarette. The sky was bruised purple, the kind of color that comes only when night refuses to die.

Jack stood near the edge, looking down at the endless grid of windows — each one a tiny world, silent, unseen. Jeeny sat on the concrete ledge, her coat wrapped tight, her eyes steady on him.

It had been a long night. The kind filled with too much truth, too little mercy.

Jeeny: “You didn’t have to yell at him like that, Jack. You could’ve made your point without tearing him apart.”

Jack: “Tearing him apart? He needed to hear it. You can’t fix a crack by pretending it’s a shadow. I told him the truth — blunt, sure — but real. Sometimes the only way to get through to someone is to shake them awake.”

Host: Jack’s voice was low but sharp, cutting through the night air like a blade. The wind tugged at his jacket, and the embers of his cigarette glowed faintly, a small, burning heartbeat.

Jeeny: “But truth without empathy is just cruelty in disguise. You call it honesty, but sometimes it’s just ego — wanting to be right instead of wanting to help.”

Jack: “No, Jeeny. That’s where you’re wrong. Damon Dash said it best — ‘My delivery can be intense, but it’s intense because I need to be heard.’ That’s me. I’ve watched too many people drown in polite lies because everyone was too afraid to offend them. Sometimes you’ve got to throw the cold water, even if it hurts.”

Host: Jeeny’s eyes narrowed, but not with anger — with something like sorrow. Her voice softened, but the words landed with precision.

Jeeny: “You think volume equals truth. But shouting doesn’t make people listen; it just makes them defend themselves. You’re not throwing water, Jack — you’re throwing fire.”

Jack: “Maybe. But at least I’m throwing something real. Look around, Jeeny — everyone’s walking on eggshells. ‘Be nice, be diplomatic, don’t upset anyone.’ And what does that create? Mediocrity. People more afraid of being uncomfortable than being wrong.”

Jeeny: “So your solution is to be the storm? To bulldoze through people’s emotions in the name of truth?”

Jack: “If that’s what it takes, yes. Because comfort kills change. The civil rights movement, the women’s marches, the workers’ strikes — none of them started with polite whispers. They started with people who spoke like they were on fire. People who didn’t care if the world got offended.”

Host: The city lights below shimmered like scattered embers. A distant sirens’ cry rose and fell — a warning, a memory, an echo of unrest.

Jeeny: “You’re confusing passion with aggression. Martin Luther King spoke with conviction, but he never crushed people beneath his tone. He moved them. There’s a difference.”

Jack: “No, there isn’t. He was hated too — called dangerous, ungrateful, even radical. You think the truth ever comes dressed in manners? You can whisper it all you want — the deaf won’t hear it.”

Host: A long pause followed. The wind died. The sound of the city fell away until it was just the two of them — words suspended in the thin air between truth and tenderness.

Jeeny: “But when your truth blinds compassion, it stops being truth. It becomes judgment. You say you just want to be heard — but what if the way you speak makes people stop listening?”

Jack: “Then that’s on them. If someone can’t take constructive criticism without breaking apart, maybe they were never built for the truth in the first place. You can’t grow if you can’t handle pain.”

Jeeny: “And you can’t teach if you can’t handle humility. You can be right, Jack, and still be wrong in how you deliver it.”

Host: The neon sign from across the street flickered — “OPEN 24 HOURS” — casting a faint blue pulse over Jack’s face. It made him look both alive and haunted, as though the light was coming from inside him, not outside.

Jack: “So what do you suggest? Sugarcoat it? Wrap the truth in ribbons so no one feels bad? The world’s too fragile for that, Jeeny. We need more people who tell it straight.”

Jeeny: “I’m not saying soften the truth. I’m saying humanize it. If your words burn everything they touch, what’s left for anyone to stand on?”

Host: Her voice trembled, the kind of tremble that came not from fear, but from caring too deeply. Jack looked at her — the kind of look that carried both defiance and fatigue.

Jack: “You sound like everyone else who tells me to tone it down. But I won’t. I’d rather be misunderstood than unheard.”

Jeeny: “And I’d rather be remembered for healing than for hurting, even if the healing takes longer.”

Jack: “Healing comes after the wound. Someone has to make the cut first.”

Jeeny: “No. Someone has to show there’s another way. People don’t change because you corner them — they change because they feel seen.”

Host: A gust of wind swept across the rooftop, knocking over an empty bottle that rolled and clinked against the concrete. The sound lingered, hollow and rhythmic, like a ticking clock reminding them both how short the night was.

Jeeny: “You say you don’t care if people get offended. But deep down, you do — not because you need their approval, but because you need to matter. Because when no one listens, you feel invisible.”

Jack: “You think this is about insecurity?”

Jeeny: “No, Jack. It’s about longing. You want to wake people up, but you also want to be part of something that listens back. You want dialogue, not just echoes.”

Host: Jack’s jaw clenched, but his eyes betrayed him. For a moment, the armor cracked — and beneath it, something raw flickered, like a child pressing his ear to a locked door, hoping to hear a voice call back.

Jack: “Maybe. Maybe I just learned too young that silence is deadly. My old man never said a damn thing until it was too late — until everything fell apart. So yeah, I talk loud. Because I promised myself I’d never die unheard.”

Jeeny: “That’s not intensity, Jack. That’s grief pretending to be strength.”

Host: The words hit him harder than any argument. The wind seemed to vanish; even the city noise dulled.

Jack: “So what, I should start whispering now? Apologize for having a voice?”

Jeeny: “No. Don’t whisper. Just listen — sometimes even silence delivers the message.”

Host: For a long time, neither spoke. The sky was beginning to fade into the first hint of dawn, a pale gray line stretching across the horizon like an unspoken apology.

Jack: “You really think people can change without being shaken?”

Jeeny: “Only if they’re given the chance to hear themselves in the echo. You don’t have to soften your truth — just let it breathe.”

Host: Jack took a long drag from his cigarette, then flicked it over the ledge. The ember fell through the darkness, a tiny falling star.

Jack: “You know, for someone so gentle, you hit harder than anyone I know.”

Jeeny: “That’s because I aim for the heart, not the armor.”

Host: The sunlight began to push through the haze, tinting the sky in hues of rose and silver. The world below started to stir — a few cars, a few voices, the hum of life returning.

Jack: “Maybe I can learn that — how to speak without burning everything.”

Jeeny: “And maybe I can learn to be louder when it matters.”

Host: They shared a faint smile — tired, but real. The wind brushed against them like a quiet applause.

Below, the city awakened to another day of noise and noise pretending to be meaning. But on that rooftop, two voices — one made of fire, one made of light — had finally met somewhere in the middle, where truth and compassion could coexist without apology.

And as the sun rose, it painted them both in gold — two different ways of being heard, both finally listening.

Damon Dash
Damon Dash

American - Businessman Born: May 3, 1971

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