Not failure, but low aim, is crime.

Not failure, but low aim, is crime.

22/09/2025
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Not failure, but low aim, is crime.

Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.
Not failure, but low aim, is crime.

Host: The night pressed close against the city’s glass windows, and the rain painted silver threads down every pane. Neon signs flickered in puddles like broken constellations. Inside a small, forgotten bar — one of those places where the clock seemed too tired to move — Jack sat hunched over a half-empty glass, the light catching the sharp lines of his face. Across from him, Jeeny stirred her drink slowly, her eyes deep and bright like wet earth after a storm.

A record player murmured somewhere in the corner — the faint, nostalgic hum of an old jazz tune — as if time itself was exhaling in rhythm.

Jeeny: “James Russell Lowell once said, ‘Not failure, but low aim, is crime.’

Jack: (leans back, his voice rough) “Easy to say when you’re not starving from your own mistakes.”

Host: The cigarette smoke drifted between them like a quiet argument.

Jeeny: “It’s not about success or starvation. It’s about daring. About what we choose to reach for.”

Jack: “Daring’s a young person’s game. The rest of us just try not to drown.”

Host: His tone carried a weary gravity, the kind of weight that comes not from defeat, but from too many small compromises.

Jeeny: “You talk like failure’s a wound that never heals.”

Jack: “It doesn’t. It scabs over. But you can still feel it itch every time you move.”

Jeeny: “Then maybe it’s not the failure that hurts — maybe it’s knowing you aimed too low before you fell.”

Host: The words landed between them like a dropped coin in still water. Jack looked away, his reflection fractured in the glass, the flicker of neon splitting across his face.

Jack: “You ever aimed high, Jeeny? Really high — high enough to break something inside you?”

Jeeny: “Every day I breathe.”

Jack: (smirks) “That poetic armor of yours — it must be exhausting.”

Jeeny: “It’s not armor. It’s oxygen.”

Host: A faint laugh escaped her, but her eyes stayed serious, searching his. The rain outside grew heavier, its rhythm syncing with the pulse of the bar’s dim light.

Jeeny: “Lowell wasn’t preaching arrogance. He meant that mediocrity — the refusal to try — is the real crime. Failing means you moved. But aiming low means you chose not to live.”

Jack: “You say that like every dream’s worth chasing. Tell that to the guy who wanted to be a painter and ended up homeless.”

Jeeny: “Van Gogh again?”

Jack: (nods) “He’s your favorite example.”

Jeeny: “Because he aimed high — beyond what the world could see. And yes, he suffered. But he left behind light. That’s the point, Jack. Not comfort — impact.”

Host: The barlight quivered over their faces. A drop of rain rolled down the window, catching the glow like a tear suspended in hesitation.

Jack: “Impact doesn’t feed you. You can’t eat dreams.”

Jeeny: “Maybe not. But you can starve without them.”

Host: A pause. The record crackled softly, as if reluctant to break the silence.

Jack: “You really think failing big is better than succeeding small?”

Jeeny: “No. I think fearing failure is worse than failing itself. The moment you shrink your aim to fit your fear — that’s when you commit the real crime.”

Host: The light above their table buzzed faintly. Jack ran a hand over his jaw, eyes tracing the stains on the wall as though each one was a memory.

Jack: “When I was younger, I wanted to build something — a company, maybe. Something real. But every time I got close, I thought about what would happen if I fell. I aimed smaller. Safer. Now I’m just… stuck.”

Jeeny: “You didn’t fail, Jack. You froze.”

Jack: “Same difference.”

Jeeny: “No — freezing’s worse. Failure teaches. Fear numbs.”

Host: She leaned forward, her voice steady, her gaze sharp enough to cut through the fog of his cynicism.

Jeeny: “The world’s built on the shoulders of people who aimed too high and fell. Edison failed a thousand times before the light came on. Mandela aimed for equality and spent decades in a cell. Aim low, and you might survive. Aim high, and you might change the world.”

Jack: “Or die trying.”

Jeeny: “Then die honest.”

Host: The words hit him like a quiet blow. His glass trembled slightly in his hand before he set it down. Outside, a car passed, its headlights streaking through the rain, briefly illuminating his expression — a flicker of doubt softened by recognition.

Jack: “You ever think we romanticize failure too much? The broken artist, the fallen dreamer — all that tragic poetry? Maybe aiming high just feeds the myth that pain equals worth.”

Jeeny: “Pain doesn’t equal worth. But courage does. The pain is the price, not the prize.”

Host: Her voice carried an undercurrent of sadness now — not just belief, but the memory of her own failures, perhaps. The light caught her face, and for a heartbeat, Jack saw the tremor behind her conviction.

Jack: (quietly) “You ever failed at something that mattered?”

Jeeny: “Once.”

Jack: “What was it?”

Jeeny: (smiles faintly) “Trying to save someone who didn’t want saving.”

Host: Silence again. The kind that feels like a held breath before a confession. The record hissed, the rain softened, and for a moment, the whole world seemed to lean in.

Jack: “Maybe we’re all guilty, then. Not of failing — but of lowering the bar until we can step over it without effort.”

Jeeny: “Exactly. Crime by caution. Safety as sin.”

Jack: “And yet, it’s the safest crime to commit.”

Jeeny: “Until you wake up and realize your whole life was a sentence.”

Host: The neon outside flickered one last time, then steadied into a steady blue hum. The bar seemed to exhale.

Jack: (sighs) “So what — you think I should quit my job, chase the impossible again?”

Jeeny: “I think you should want something impossible again. Even if you never catch it. That wanting — that’s where the living happens.”

Jack: “And if I fall?”

Jeeny: “Then you’ll know you aimed true.”

Host: A long silence. The clock ticked once, twice, as the rain faded to a whisper.

Jack looked at her — really looked — and something in his eyes softened, the hard edges blurring into something like clarity.

Jack: “You’re dangerous, Jeeny.”

Jeeny: (smiling) “No. I’m hopeful.”

Jack: “Same thing.”

Host: They both laughed then — quiet, almost shy, the kind of laughter that carries no mockery, only release. The record reached its final note and stilled, leaving only the soft patter of the rain outside.

Jeeny: “Promise me something, Jack.”

Jack: “What?”

Jeeny: “Don’t aim small again. Not even when it hurts.”

Jack: “You make it sound easy.”

Jeeny: “It’s not supposed to be easy. It’s supposed to be worth it.”

Host: The camera would linger now — two silhouettes beneath a dim light, the rain still whispering against the glass. Jack lifted his glass, finished the last sip, and set it down with finality.

Jack: “Alright. No more small targets.”

Jeeny: “Good.”

Host: She reached across the table and placed her hand over his. The neon reflected in the curve of her fingers, blue light mixing with warmth. Outside, the city pulsed — alive, restless, infinite — as though echoing their silent pact.

Jack: “You think Lowell ever failed?”

Jeeny: “Of course. But he never aimed low.”

Host: And with that, the scene dimmed — the rain easing into calm, the music returning, soft and distant. Somewhere, the world turned on, and in one small corner of it, two people decided to aim a little higher.

End.

James Russell Lowell
James Russell Lowell

American - Poet February 22, 1819 - August 12, 1891

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